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Deadly Sharks

By Jackson


Deadly creatures
Swimming in the ocean blue
Crunch! of a victim
Big white teeth crunch through the bone
Omnivores, herbivores, mostly carnivores
Pups swim through the ocean with their parents
Older sharks teach young pups how to kill
Cold-blooded animals


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What Readers Had To Say

 

BP64
7 Dec 09 22:14:01

A very good poem. It has lots of interesting words.

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Cookie
24 Nov 09 20:46:33

I think you did well because you used adjectives to describe your nouns.

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