Deadly creatures
Swimming in the ocean blue
Crunch! of a victim
Big white teeth crunch through the bone
Omnivores, herbivores, mostly carnivores
Pups swim through the ocean with their parents
Older sharks teach young pups how to kill
Cold-blooded animals
BP64
7 Dec 09 22:14:01
A very good poem. It has lots of interesting words.
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Cookie
24 Nov 09 20:46:33
I think you did well because you used adjectives to describe your nouns.
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